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Mobuto - Part 2 of 2
Posted by Steve (eaglesalltheway2@yahoo.com)
19 July 2006, 2:59 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Steve0719060259041.html

Matthiasthe14th · Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:43 am Post subject:

Yeah, this is definitely a BiC story (Butt in Chair). Kind of funny, though, because just as intended, it is a clear picture of the Library. Bleakness and waves of Flood... Ugh.

And I like how Guilty Spark reacts when Mobuto finally dies. Not sad or emotional, just disappointed, and not even really bothered.

Keep 'em coming. Very Happy

7/10

Dr Sky Tower · Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 4:19 am Post subject:

It's a good rendition of the battle in the Library level from a marine's point of view... one long fight sequence and endless Flood in a gloomy, dark place. Not too badly written, either!