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hboff
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 Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:56 pm Post subject: An Unggoy's Life: Chapter 38: Reinforcements and Explosions |
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An Unggoy's Life: Chapter 38: Reinforcements and Explosions
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
10 July 2006, 6:36 pm
http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0710061836011.html |
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Spartan006
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Good job, CrazyGrunt. There was only one part that seemed a little off to me. | Quote: | He slammed the throttle to full and rocketed toward the nearest Landing Ship, Plasma Cannons blazing like hellfire. As the turrets on the wingtips of the Landing Ship's I-shaped fuselage began to track him, a Super MAC round disemboweled the ship. Thomas watched as the MTT tanks that had been in the ship's cargo hold begin to float out into space, while some burned up in the atmosphere.
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This part seemed to be rushed to me, but it was still very good. 9/10. Keep up the good work, Crazy!
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CrazyGrunt
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| Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 5:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Yeah, I guess you're right about that. I did write that part sometime in the winter...I got caught up in life and just finished the chapter this week. I will get to work on Chapter 39 ASAP. |
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Syotica
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| Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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Haha, nice! Your still going with this! I haven't seen you in months, and I can't believe it! Nice work, man.  |
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