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War's Twisted
Posted by CoLd BlooDed (broken_lizard12@hotmail.com)
18 October 2004, 3:21 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=cold_blooded.1018040321231.html

russ687 · Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 8:22 pm Post subject:

First piece of work from you in....awhile.

I liked it.

-Russ

SYSTEM · Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 10:25 pm Post subject:

LIKE?!

That's an understatement, right?

I love poetry.

- Dave.
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Sentinel · Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:19 pm Post subject:

This was good. Nice job CoLd

AmokTheClown · Member Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Posts: 8 Location: Australia

good to see you used that cool poetry style i used a few months ago... ryming the last line in the first two stanza's its good... flows really well..

keep it up...

yeah, i understand how school can be... ah the memories...lol

thedarkfire · Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:18 am Post subject:

I don't remember ou doing much in the way of poetry in a while. I sorely liked it.

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 3:38 am Post subject:

Wow, thanks you guys, and you, Amok, for the rhyme scheme that you used a couple of months ago in that poem I read (I forget which one, sorry).

Again, thanks!

What's weird, though, is that this is the most comments I've gotten since this forum came out, acting as the comments section. Is that sad?

Solidus Snake · Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:51 am Post subject:

Nice comeback CoLd! Good job on the poem.

Guardian 2 · Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 1:52 am Post subject:

Great, it flowed very well.

Now you just have to post it at HFS.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Interesting.

Nice to know that you're still alive.

I think I liked it.
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CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 12:52 am Post subject:

I think I'm going to take a pause from all my other projects I have and just stick to a few poems now and then, like I used to do. It composes myself and gets me in tune with my writing... I have to post the next chapter of Archaic Incursion soon, though, so expect to see that sometime around.

'Nosolee · Member Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 73 Location: Manhattan

Good Job CoLd, nice to still see you.

SeverianofUrth · Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 3:25 pm Post subject:

Seriously, it's good to see that your alive. School messed up your schedule?

Great poem, better than anything I can do.

Chuckles · Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:04 am Post subject:

Nice job. Good to see a poem on here with a bit of length. No offense to the short ones, but you can say only so much in a couple of stanzas.

C.T. Clown