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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:29 pm    Post subject: War's Twisted Reply with quote

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War's Twisted
Posted by CoLd BlooDed (broken_lizard12@hotmail.com)
18 October 2004, 3:21 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=cold_blooded.1018040321231.html
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 8:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First piece of work from you in....awhile.

I liked it.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 10:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LIKE?!

That's an understatement, right?

I love poetry.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was good. Nice job CoLd
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 1:43 am    Post subject: ah, it all seem so clear now Reply with quote

good to see you used that cool poetry style i used a few months ago... ryming the last line in the first two stanza's its good... flows really well..

keep it up...

yeah, i understand how school can be... ah the memories...lol
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 2:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't remember ou doing much in the way of poetry in a while. I sorely liked it.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 3:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, thanks you guys, and you, Amok, for the rhyme scheme that you used a couple of months ago in that poem I read (I forget which one, sorry).

Again, thanks!

What's weird, though, is that this is the most comments I've gotten since this forum came out, acting as the comments section. Is that sad?
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice comeback CoLd! Good job on the poem.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great, it flowed very well.

Now you just have to post it at HFS.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 2:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting.

Nice to know that you're still alive.

I think I liked it.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 12:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think I'm going to take a pause from all my other projects I have and just stick to a few poems now and then, like I used to do. It composes myself and gets me in tune with my writing... I have to post the next chapter of Archaic Incursion soon, though, so expect to see that sometime around.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 2:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good Job CoLd, nice to still see you.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seriously, it's good to see that your alive. School messed up your schedule?

Great poem, better than anything I can do.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice job. Good to see a poem on here with a bit of length. No offense to the short ones, but you can say only so much in a couple of stanzas.

C.T. Clown
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