HBO Fan Fiction

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Cordero's Nightmare (I)
Posted by Nosolee (crugg2005@gmail.com)
30 June 2006, 12:22 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Nosolee0630060022041.html

monitor101 · Member Joined: 10 Aug 2004 Posts: 107 Location: Burbank

Nosolee, man its been forever since you last posted. This was very good.
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Dr Sky Tower · Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:26 pm Post subject:

This was a really good story! I liked it! Razz

I look forward to the next chapter!

thedarkfire · Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 11:37 pm Post subject:

Holy Nosolee batman! (Hehe, get it?)

Great stuff old bean and nice to see you around again.

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 12:49 am Post subject:

Where the hell have you been, man? Long time no see. Wow.

Well, I liked this. Really made me feel nostalgic, I mean, this just breathes Halo 1 fan fiction - this is exactly what it was like before Halo 2 came out. I loved it for this.

There were a couple mistakes in there, mostly spelling errors ("heard" instead of "heart", etc.), and a few punctuation errors (or lack of). Nothing too big.

Great job, though, really enjoyed that old Fan Fiction feeling. Keep 'em coming, man.

Johny117 · Member Joined: 22 Feb 2006 Posts: 118

I'm dying for the next chapter. This was excellent.
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