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Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 3

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 1:55 pm    Post subject: Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 3 Reply with quote
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Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 3
Posted by Zealot (Pat Allen) (patallen79@hotmail.com)
28 June 2006, 7:37 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Zealot_Pat_A0628060737391.html
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 1:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Good story. Reasonable plot. Too short. And the plot sequence jumps a bit. From the battle of the base to the blowing up of the scarab. Way too fast. Slow down.
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