HBO Fan Fiction

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Those Who Fought: Chapter 2
Posted by Wandering Attention (gryphonwing55@hotmail.com)
22 June 2006, 2:18 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Wandering_At0622060218381.html

noobylam · Member Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 55 Location: compton

Please leave spaces between paragraphs in your submission. It is extremely difficult to read your format. You indented properly, but forgot to divide the paragraphs. It'll be good to read next time if you follow use the CODE properly! Very Happy

Goodluck with your next one!
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