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Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 2

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 1:20 pm    Post subject: Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 2 Reply with quote

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Halo-Battle of Heita II pt 2
Posted by Zealot (Pat Allen) (patallen79@hotmail.com)
18 June 2006, 10:18 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Zealot_Pat_A0618061018211.html
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I see that you got a !@#! load of feedback in the last chapter. But I still gotta blame you for using the CODE poorly. Your formatting need some improvments as well. Though you've made some errors, the story line was pretty good! You kept your promise, but work on your formatting next time. Good luck with the next one! Very Happy

Oh yea, nice battle scenes, really well put together! I really enjoyed it! Very Happy
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