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Rise of the Imperium: Part 5
Posted by Imperorator_Jon (darthbalfy@yahoo.com)
16 June 2006, 1:50 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Imperorator_0616060150271.html

Imperorator_Jon · Member Joined: 29 Oct 2005 Posts: 97 Location: Moop?

Hi everybody! I know I missed an update, but I will be very thankful for both critism and comments. Thank you:

~Jon

thedude12345 · Member Joined: 06 May 2006 Posts: 16

Yet another good story. liked the info on how his parents died. and it was good that u used diffrent covie races. keep them coming! Very Happy

Imperorator_Jon · Member Joined: 29 Oct 2005 Posts: 97 Location: Moop?

Thanks, I was actually considering pulling the plug after two more chapters, but I think I will pull it out more than that. I also tried to make Joseph a tad.... kill happy in this chapter. I showed a bit more of Joseph's inner self also, so critism would also be appreciated!