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ONI Field Intelligence Interview
Posted by Grantix (eightypercentblinding@yahoo.com)
2 June 2006, 8:31 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Grantix0602062031061.html

[Chiajy]

It's a text wall of doom, DON'T..........EVER......DO.....THAT....AGAIN!
Use the code or people can't even read it, like me.

[Azathoth]

It was OK. The TWoD element made it seem like a real soldier's testimony, I guess, but it kind of detracts from the readability-looking at a computer screen without text breaks kind of hurts your eyes after a bit. However, this was short enough that it didn't really annoy me as much as usual.

[Chiajy]

Oh well, but I still can't read it, if the writer is kind enough, could you please send in an edited copy so we can read it? Dagorath seems to think it's good.

[Johny117]

Um, do you know how to paragraph?
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