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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 1:58 am    Post subject: A Last Stand Reply with quote

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A Last Stand
Posted by John Gurule, Jr. (d3jsgurule@yahoo.com)
13 October 2004, 4:15 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=john_gurule,.1013040415111.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 2:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was pretty good, I'm glad too see some people are not too intimidated by peer pressure to show that they are Christian's, as am I, and proud of it too Cool , because I know where I'm going when I die, and that it will be the greatest day in my life when the Golden Gates of Heaven open up and I am at last welcomed into my home. I am glad that your wrote that John. And may we all continue to pray for all the lost souls that are wondering alone out their.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 6:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woohoo! Christians forever!!!!
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And God saw that it was good!

Swift'n'Painful, where's your signature gone?
Nice story!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heh, for some reason, I got another error as I clicked the little link.

And refreshing won't do any good.

Looks like I'll have to wait.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, the database has been conking out like mad these past few days- fiction overload, y'know.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 12:22 pm    Post subject: fiction overload... Reply with quote

Fiction overload? hahaha...been much busier than in 2003, I think...

Well, every good side has its bad side...and vice versa.

Okay, i'm off to finish Part 2 of my story...have been overwriting it four times now, and finally found a good start...
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah... Religious refrences.

No symbolism, however, the Lamb's already in the bible.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 5:07 am    Post subject: your nanna Reply with quote

not to bad, a bit more length though. it was just starting to get interesting then it cut off...
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, religion is important stuff. It is important to believe in something. I, personally, believe in the one true God as well. But enough of that, now to talk about that writing...

It could have used better symbolism. Also, it could have flowed a lot better. Should have been spread out more, too; it seemed jumbled and bunched up the way it was.
And, oh, I didn't see much Halo realtion there. But, I still get the point, mostly anyway.
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