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A Last Stand
Posted by John Gurule, Jr. (d3jsgurule@yahoo.com)
13 October 2004, 4:15 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=john_gurule,.1013040415111.html

Swift'n'Painful · Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 2:49 am Post subject:

That was pretty good, I'm glad too see some people are not too intimidated by peer pressure to show that they are Christian's, as am I, and proud of it too Cool

, because I know where I'm going when I die, and that it will be the greatest day in my life when the Golden Gates of Heaven open up and I am at last welcomed into my home. I am glad that your wrote that John. And may we all continue to pray for all the lost souls that are wondering alone out their.

MasterSushi · Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 6:48 am Post subject:

Woohoo! Christians forever!!!!

SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:29 pm Post subject:

Heh, for some reason, I got another error as I clicked the little link.

And refreshing won't do any good.

Looks like I'll have to wait.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

Pajari · Member Joined: 28 Sep 2004 Posts: 100 Location: Luna

Yeah, the database has been conking out like mad these past few days- fiction overload, y'know.

JCDentonCZ · Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 12:22 pm Post subject: fiction overload...

Fiction overload? hahaha...been much busier than in 2003, I think...

Well, every good side has its bad side...and vice versa.

Okay, i'm off to finish Part 2 of my story...have been overwriting it four times now, and finally found a good start...
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A million ideas..

SYSTEM · Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2004 9:10 pm Post subject:

Ah... Religious refrences.

No symbolism, however, the Lamb's already in the bible.

- Dave.
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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

AmokTheClown · Member Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Posts: 8 Location: Australia

not to bad, a bit more length though. it was just starting to get interesting then it cut off...

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Hey, religion is important stuff. It is important to believe in something. I, personally, believe in the one true God as well. But enough of that, now to talk about that writing...

It could have used better symbolism. Also, it could have flowed a lot better. Should have been spread out more, too; it seemed jumbled and bunched up the way it was.
And, oh, I didn't see much Halo realtion there. But, I still get the point, mostly anyway.
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