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hboff
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:49 pm    Post subject: Rising Damp Reply with quote

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Rising Damp
Posted by Jillybean (jbean_gotmuse@yahoo.co.uk)
21 July 2004, 1:26 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=jillybean.0721041326341.html
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Wado
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:10 pm    Post subject: Great story Reply with quote

Oh I will have to come back and give a more thorough review, but I can't help but leave a comment.

Great going Jillybean, and congrats, your story has the first comment in the new system. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wado what happened to all of the old members liek Shadowsomthing hunter_killer and alll those? O and good story Jilly bean
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Wado
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:21 pm    Post subject: Lurkers all of them (j/k) Reply with quote

Brigad_of_marines wrote:
Wado what happened to all of the old members liek Shadowsomthing hunter_killer and alll those?


Brigad_of_marines, they are still around but have not registered to post comments yet. This is a new comments section for HBO. In fact, you are the first person to register other than me and I'm a moderator.

This new comments section has not been officially launched yet, so I'm sure that many writers will register and leave comments when the word gets out.

Good to hear from you.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 5:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wado how are you just like a differant moderater than the HBO moderators?

Edited by Wado: Confusion fixed. Stay on topic please. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 8:19 pm    Post subject: I would have voted for it Reply with quote

Jillybean, you have outdone yourself. Despite your always good stories, this one was one of the best. And it was for the Enkidu contest too.

Gosh, I can't even critique it. At first I thought, oh great a 26th century trench war, how quaint, but that was not the jest of it.

Wonderful job. I think I may suggest that if you have the inspiration, fix up the ending a bit someday. First it has a few grammar errors (an it's that should be an its, and a me that should be a my, and stuff something like that). But something else is missing at the ending, I'm not sure what, maybe it will come to me.

Otherwise, fantastic, wonderful, bravo. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 8:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wado's right! This was an exceptional piece of writing. Keep it up!

Woohoo! This is my first post!
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 8:43 am    Post subject: GEE Reply with quote

GEE GOLLY GOSH WILIKERS!


Superb story!
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 8:25 pm    Post subject: Wow Reply with quote

Incredible story. It's been a while since I've read a story that good here. Good descriptions and nice insights into the main character's mind. Very good! Keep up the good work, and I'll be waiting for more stories from you!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So this is the first story in the new posting format...

And it's a Jillybean story!

How interesting!

Razz
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 2:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm... Yes... Yes indeed... Very interesting...

But you had better not try to raise your post count here! I'm a mod at a different forum and I know how frustrating that can be! I sympathize with Wado!

But yes... Interesting...
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 2:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Please don't haunt me with that... It's not going to happen again!

And are you watching all the stories or something? You always seem to pop up when I say something!

It's...disturbing
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