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Created and Consumed (Chapter 5)

 
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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2006 4:38 pm    Post subject: Created and Consumed (Chapter 5) Reply with quote

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Created and Consumed (Chapter 5)
Posted by Zyrra-Chylde-Aisha (Zyrra-Chylde-Aisha)
20 May 2006, 10:17 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Zyrra-Chylde0520062217081.html
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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2006 12:17 am    Post subject: Code problems... Reply with quote

yo buddy wazzup! Razz

-anyways, you didn't use the CODE rules, such as indenting and dividing the paragraphs apart with lines to make it easier for readers to read...Just improve on your grammar and you'll be fine. GOOD START by the way! Very Happy

-I like how you named the elites! haha, funny. I thought their names always ended with double e "ee", like Zuka' Zamamee and Olii' Polsamee. LOL, well at least you made them seem less weird! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2006 1:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

tight! this is a real relief from all the marine stories... Very Happy keep writing and i'll keep reading
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PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2006 11:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Liked the story a lot. But i would like to know y he killed him. Keep them coming
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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 8:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I want to tell you that Morta didn't kill him, as of current, not even I know! But a snapped neck will do it to you. I'm glad you all like this chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Can someone tell me more about these codes?
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PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 10:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://hboff.bungie.org/viewtopic.php?t=2785.

There you have it. Keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Sun May 28, 2006 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for that, I'll remember it for Chapter 6
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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 6:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Before, we said about submitting multiple chapters at once. You have separated them, but, there is two of them now. If you have made the next two chapters then save number seven for next week, you'll then have a spare if you didn't write anything and the update is coming up. Also, It's easier for others to comment. I wasn't sure which story to post on but since this seemed more veiwed I put it here.

noobylam wrote:
-I like how you named the elites! haha, funny. I thought their names always ended with double e "ee", like Zuka' Zamamee and Olii' Polsamee. LOL, well at least you made them seem less weird!

Elite's names are meant to be like that. The "ee" is to signal they are a member of the Covenant, After they have passed their test to adulthood/a warrior at thirteen. The middle sylable is their Clan/Family. 'Polsamee signals that Olii is part of the Sam clan. The first part is random.
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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 8:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first part isn't quite random. It is an adjective describing them, IIRC. Anyway, Clan Sam=t3h R0xX0rSz!!!one! Wow, that was total advertising of my own fic.

Anyway, I really do like this story and I'd like to see more of it.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey guys, sorry for the bump, just letting people know that chapters 6 and 7 have been submitted to HBO and are waiting for approval. Anyone still waiting for the update (I wouldn't be surprised if there really isn't anyone after 4 years) keep your eyes peeled.

I'm back in the writing biz now, joy.
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