| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
hboff
Site Admin
Joined: 25 Jul 2004
Posts: 4352
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
noobylam
Member
Joined: 18 May 2006
Posts: 55
Location: compton
|
 Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 12:17 am Post subject: Code problems... |
 |
|
yo buddy wazzup! 
-anyways, you didn't use the CODE rules, such as indenting and dividing the paragraphs apart with lines to make it easier for readers to read...Just improve on your grammar and you'll be fine. GOOD START by the way! 
-I like how you named the elites! haha, funny. I thought their names always ended with double e "ee", like Zuka' Zamamee and Olii' Polsamee. LOL, well at least you made them seem less weird! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
mooching sack of death
Member
Joined: 20 Apr 2005
Posts: 25
Location: bleh
|
| Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 1:19 am Post subject: |
|
|
| tight! this is a real relief from all the marine stories... keep writing and i'll keep reading |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
thedude12345
Member
Joined: 06 May 2006
Posts: 16
|
| Posted: Tue May 23, 2006 11:09 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Liked the story a lot. But i would like to know y he killed him. Keep them coming |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Zyrra
Member
Joined: 07 May 2006
Posts: 8
|
| Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 8:00 am Post subject: |
|
|
| I want to tell you that Morta didn't kill him, as of current, not even I know! But a snapped neck will do it to you. I'm glad you all like this chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Can someone tell me more about these codes? |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
STEEL RAIN
Member
Joined: 23 Jan 2006
Posts: 136
Location: WI, New York
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Zyrra
Member
Joined: 07 May 2006
Posts: 8
|
| Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 12:01 am Post subject: |
|
|
| Thanks for that, I'll remember it for Chapter 6 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Halo Fanatic 2006
Member
Joined: 17 Apr 2006
Posts: 139
Location: Azeroth, I can't find my way out!
|
| Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 6:28 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Before, we said about submitting multiple chapters at once. You have separated them, but, there is two of them now. If you have made the next two chapters then save number seven for next week, you'll then have a spare if you didn't write anything and the update is coming up. Also, It's easier for others to comment. I wasn't sure which story to post on but since this seemed more veiwed I put it here.
| noobylam wrote: | | -I like how you named the elites! haha, funny. I thought their names always ended with double e "ee", like Zuka' Zamamee and Olii' Polsamee. LOL, well at least you made them seem less weird! |
Elite's names are meant to be like that. The "ee" is to signal they are a member of the Covenant, After they have passed their test to adulthood/a warrior at thirteen. The middle sylable is their Clan/Family. 'Polsamee signals that Olii is part of the Sam clan. The first part is random. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Azathoth
Member
Joined: 22 Nov 2005
Posts: 578
Location: South Africa. Fooken creatshas.
|
| Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 8:48 pm Post subject: |
|
|
The first part isn't quite random. It is an adjective describing them, IIRC. Anyway, Clan Sam=t3h R0xX0rSz!!!one! Wow, that was total advertising of my own fic.
Anyway, I really do like this story and I'd like to see more of it. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Zyrra
Member
Joined: 07 May 2006
Posts: 8
|
| Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 12:16 am Post subject: |
|
|
Hey guys, sorry for the bump, just letting people know that chapters 6 and 7 have been submitted to HBO and are waiting for approval. Anyone still waiting for the update (I wouldn't be surprised if there really isn't anyone after 4 years) keep your eyes peeled.
I'm back in the writing biz now, joy. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Log in
