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hboff Site Admin
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STEEL RAIN Member

Joined: 23 Jan 2006 Posts: 136 Location: WI, New York
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Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 4:39 pm Post subject: |
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| Another good one, but it's getting dull cause we already know what happens! |
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Azathoth Member

Joined: 22 Nov 2005 Posts: 578 Location: South Africa. Fooken creatshas.
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| Yes, well, it's not exactly all known. What was Half-Jaw doing, exactly, in the QZ? Did he return to High Charity? What was he doing after the Arbiter 'died' and how did he know that the Arbiter was 'dead'? Etc. Etc. Etc. |
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Syotica Moderator

Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Posts: 579 Location: Northern Michigan
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 2:26 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting. Some of it got me a little confused, but nice detail. I can see where you are going with this.  |
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Halo Fanatic 2006 Member

Joined: 17 Apr 2006 Posts: 139 Location: Azeroth, I can't find my way out!
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Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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| It's been twelve chapters and you've kept the plot concealed pretty well, just a few people creeping onto thier theories now. |
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Chiajy Member
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Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 5:20 am Post subject: |
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| Personally, I still like it. |
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