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Short Tales of Terror (3): A Tale of Death
Posted by Chuckles
18 May 2006, 3:35 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Chuckles0518061535471.html

Mainevent · Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 5:35 pm Post subject:

Well Chuck, you already know my thoughts on this (if not, check your PMs).

Excellent as always.

Guardian · Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 7:16 pm Post subject:

So you're finally back eh? Well I think you've known me somewhat long enough to know exactly what I would say to your story. So i'll let your imagination do the job I'm supposed to do, for me.

I'm lazy, but don't sue me.

-Shad

Spartan006 · Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 8:36 pm Post subject:

Whoa.....that was terrifyingly good. I've read your stories before, and this one is no different, and is summed up in one word. Excelent. I am honored to give this story 10/10, and that's only because I can't go any higher.
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Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 9:31 pm Post subject:

Well, someone has to be the bearer of bad news... hehe, not me. Well I did have two little gripes with the story and that is that it was very similar to Robert Ludlum's The Ambler Warning, and having read that I was able to predict at least a little bit of the story (though not all of it, and for that I tip my hat to you).

But overall it was just as good as the last two, if not better. Oh, and the second gripe was it took so long to come out, heh, we demand another. Keep it up my friend.

Chuckles · Posted: Sun May 21, 2006 9:58 pm Post subject:

CDW wrote:

Hashey · Member Joined: 05 Oct 2004 Posts: 24

Finally, another one. I love this series Very Happy

Mister Gray · Member Joined: 23 Nov 2005 Posts: 24 Location: U.S.A.

My character was so cool Very Happy

. Despite the fact that you didn't see much of him, he was still awesome. So wait, his neck was broken and it said Jeremy broke one guy's neck. The guy that had his neck broken (not Mr. Gray) was Boony, right? So, does that mean Mr. Gray was Boony? I'm confused, but that's not an unnatural thing.
Anyway, great story, Chuck. I'll be looking forward to another and Wolf was completely right in saying,

Matthiasthe14th · Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 8:59 am Post subject:

Totally awesome! 10/10!

Chuckles · Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 9:05 am Post subject:

Mister Gray wrote:

(Na)Marl · Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 10:20 pm Post subject:

Mister Gray · Member Joined: 23 Nov 2005 Posts: 24 Location: U.S.A.

Oh yeah, I knew that Very Happy

. Uh, I don't get the Boony thing. Was that something from before I came to HBOFF?
-Mr. Gray

me · Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 3:48 am Post subject: Tales of terror

[quote="Mister Gray"]Oh yeah, I knew that Very Happy

. Uh, I don't get the [i]Boony[/i] thing. Was that something from before I came to HBOFF?
-Mr. Gray[/quote]

I think its like Daniel Boone or however you say that I never really liked history. But good story I liked it but thats just ME. Sombody should shoot me for that pun. Anyway just One maybe two questions. So Stella was the one who dressed up as the Reaper and killed the other crazy man to scare Thomas as revenge? And she purposely withheld the medicine so thathe would seem lucid and the doc would have to call the ONI. or was that just a coincidence.

Mainevent · Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 3:50 am Post subject:

Well I think Death was a separate entity here, who happened to come at the same time he told Stella (not an accident).

Stella just shot him because he killed her rebel boyfriend.

Gray was trying to kill him because he'd broken his neck before.

Matthiasthe14th · Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 5:59 am Post subject: