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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2006 4:36 pm    Post subject: Poem Busters --1-- Reply with quote

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Poem Busters --1--
Posted by Alpha Halo Writer (wsandlin@yahoo.com)
15 May 2006, 2:58 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alpha_Halo_W0515061458401.html
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PostPosted: Mon May 22, 2006 8:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm. Waaaay too short, and you said nothing. That looked like a scribbled summary of about fifteen seconds of playing Halo with a friend. Yeah, I know that poems can take many forms, but whatever form they take, they still have to say something interesting.

I still think that you have a lot of potential for writing poems (based on a different submission) but you have got to push yourself harder than this.

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PostPosted: Sat May 27, 2006 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's way too short!
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