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hboff
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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| I liked htis one two, you really are a good writer. Good luck with part five then. |
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pest/swingamajig
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Thank you, but I really think part 4 is the best you'll get out of me!  |
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STEEL RAIN
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| Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 12:40 am Post subject: |
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| Your a bastard you know that..... you made it too damn short for my liking, try to lengthn it more, you got people into your story now its time to make them more meaty! |
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Spartan006
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Very good. Steel may have thought that it was too short, but some of us don't have the luxury of time that he has  .I'll be waiting for part 5. I will give you a 9/10.
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STEEL RAIN
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| Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:55 am Post subject: |
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| Na... I just read fast! Kinda have to when your a mechanic. |
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Chiajy
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| Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 6:18 am Post subject: |
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| I think it's okay in times of length and update. |
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noobylam
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 12:16 am Post subject: You da bomb!!!! |
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you know what? You just inspired me to continue writing after I got shit talked out of it by my big bro 4 months ago...
thankyou my man!
after reading that story! I trying to make something as good as it already! no luck so far though...  its too damn good man |
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herosaber
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Nice.
i was rather intrested in the part where kelaiegh(NVM) got hit.
either that or wrong post.(bet'cha dont know what the heck im saying.)
i like this one. keep up the good work.
i wonder about whether will we fight covenant or side by side and meet new species of covenant or whatever(AKA,enemies)in halo 3...hmm...
cant wait for pt5. |
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pest/swingamajig
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Whoa I did not think a sixteen year old such as myself could inspire someone but thanks
By the way *fans* I plan to do a little offset story before doing part 5, and It will be a while until then because I have exams! |
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pest/swingamajig
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| Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:30 am Post subject: |
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| exams will be over next week, then ill be back into writing |
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