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STEEL RAIN
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| Your mean.......... it was way to short, you could've at least contiued for abit longer, you draw me in and cut it off suddenly just as it was getting good. |
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Ah yeah I know, I realize that... But it was 2 in the morning and I knew I had to get up at 7 ... If I had typed any longer I would have passed out on top of the keyboard. Haha.
Well look at it this way, now you have all the more reason to anticipate the next chapter.  I really have some cool stuff planned that I am hoping will even surprise myself.
And I'm sorry it took so freakin long to get this chapter out. I suffered from writer's block, wrote the chapter, rewrote it with a different scenario - and I'm just a big whiner.
Well anyway I hope you guys like the chapter, despite its annoying shortness.  |
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Imperorator_Jon
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| Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 2:36 am Post subject: |
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| *shakes Random by the shoulders* Curse you!! You left a cliffie! I waited forever to see the continuation of this story! *back-hand slaps himself* Ugh, okay, this needs explaning. Is howard a scientist or something? Does he work with ONI in this matter? Is Ariana dead? I need details curse you! |
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Random 14-Year-Old
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Ah, damn it - yeah my updates are annoyingly sporadic. I blame myself. But to sort of answer what you wanna know -
There is a lot more to Howard than what you learned a few chapters ago. No, he does not have anything to do with ONI, but he would like to think he does.
Ariana. Might. Be. Dead.
But dead or not, expect her to be the object of Ren's purpose sooner or later. |
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Dagorath
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Excellent. I take a peek in here and I see my favourite serie(s)! Mysterious, interesting....tension..... Howard has a Forerunner object that blocks plasma and he saved Ren. He ate Ariana and used a lock of her hair to power the object. And now he's going to add Ren's hair to the object so that his hair and Ariana's will merge and Howard will be all-powerful....right?
Anyway, nice to see you again! |
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STEEL RAIN
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| Posted: Sat May 13, 2006 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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| Hurrr.... were did you get that from?! |
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Imperorator_Jon
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That....was....scary Dagoroth. I mean really scary. Even scarier than what was in the All Power fanfic....
Meh, I just want to see more! Give me more, curse you! Or else I will set Alucard on you!! (It's also spelt Arucard, but I prefer the normal way) |
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How did you know, Dagorath? How did you know??
Hah. Arucard? That's the name of the protagonist in a non-Halo story I'm writing...
Well thanks for all the comments, I guess I should get back to work on figuring out an alternative plotline now that Dagorath has guessed my flawless original.  |
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