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A Contemplation: 2 of 3
Posted by Delta-034 (the.king.under.the.mountain@hotmail.com)
28 April 2006, 8:02 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Delta-0340428062002561.html

[Commander Demitri Wolf]

Okay, better believe that I'm still reading this and am very interested in where it's going. But you lost me a bit with the thing in the future, I wasn't sure if it's something that will one day happen or something he dreamed, the Time/Date stamp really threw my off, as it seemed like a day dream.
Still read pretty darn well, and I'm looking forward to part 3, better write an Epilogue too .

[Delta-034]

Funny you should mention an epilouge. Cause I was planning on it. This is kinda my test trilogy. In reality my idea for the series goes way beyond a trilogy. So I kinda need an epilouge to keep the back door open for more stories.

It was a dream. What I was trying to convey was Spartan 060's subconcious doubts as to what his purpose would be after the war. In this dream, I tried to stress that he was in a kind of retirement, but his training still had nearly complete control, that all he was good for was killing. Thats what I was going for. Part 3 ought to be longer. And offer a conclusion to this plot, or maybe a begining, I haven't decided yet.

Again thanks for the input.

-034

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I also was trying to tie in the title: "A contemplation" with the actuall story, even though it was a dream sequence, I was hoping to show that these thoughts and ideas or contemplations were manifesting themselves in his dreams.

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[Commander Demitri Wolf]

Ah you're welcome. Come on, more people read this! Bout time some people started posting more.

[Johny117]

:O Very nice.
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