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hboff
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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Whoa...
Description: 10/10
Punctuation: 9.5/10
Sentence Structure: 10/10
Plot: 9.9/10
Whoa... again.
You are an amazing writer, how many stories have you written around here cause I've never seen you here before.
10/10
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Wellington
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Thanks a lot, man. I appreciate it.
Yes, I've written a few other series, though, unfortunately, so far this is the most popular one to date. Heh. |
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Commander Demitri Wolf
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I'm gonna read this, man, I liked the look of it alot. And skimming through I found a line that made me go 'Hell Yeah!' | Quote: | | "You've got to stop saying that, Eyal," she said. "It's Australia. It's beautiful everyday." |
Thankyou, we rock *bows*. If the start is anything to go by I'll enjoy the rest of it, hope to read it soon. |
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Delta-034
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Wow, in a good way.
I'm currently reading a book by the name of Footfall, By Larry Niven. It starts out with a bunch of stuff having to do with the President (US) and his advisors and anyway, your descriptions and diologes with your charecters imediatly called to mind Nivens work. Thats a complement.
Keep up the good stuff.
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Wellington
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Thank you, Delta. I've never read anything by Larry Niven, though perhaps I should give it a try.
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Commander Demitri Wolf
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| Okay, I read it, superbly written and well thought out. I liked the idea of the Council, reminded me of the Galactic Senate from star Wars, hehe. Very nice story you've started here, keep it up. |
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Cassus Falco
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| Quote: | I'm gonna read this, man, I liked the look of it alot. And skimming through I found a line that made me go 'Hell Yeah!' Quote:
| Quote: | | "You've got to stop saying that, Eyal," she said. "It's Australia. It's beautiful everyday." |
Thankyou, we rock *bows*. If the start is anything to go by I'll enjoy the rest of it, hope to read it soon. |
Hmmm. James, obviously you've never been to a little place called Melbourne. Great story. |
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Wellington
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Thanks to both of you. Hopefully I can avoid any further resemblances to Star Wars 
Where do you live in Australia, by the way CDW? |
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Imperorator_Jon
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| Truely something to come back to after this long period of being away. I am truely impressed. It makes my stories look like junk, to be frank. Well, hope you post more stories! |
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Commander Demitri Wolf
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| Wellington wrote: | Thanks to both of you. Hopefully I can avoid any further resemblances to Star Wars
Where do you live in Australia, by the way CDW? |
Oh no, I liked the Star Warsesque part, very much so, don't change it too drastically. And I live about two hours out of Sydney (which isn't the capital, but it damn well should be), it's quite nice here  .
And before I forget, this is my 1000th post, good to break the hundreds finally. |
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