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UN is the Loneliest Number

 
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:29 pm    Post subject: UN is the Loneliest Number Reply with quote

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UN is the Loneliest Number
Posted by Arthur Wellesley (arthur_wellesly@hotmail.com)
28 April 2006, 2:34 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle0428060234221.html
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PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2006 1:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoa...

Description: 10/10
Punctuation: 9.5/10
Sentence Structure: 10/10
Plot: 9.9/10

Whoa... again.

You are an amazing writer, how many stories have you written around here cause I've never seen you here before.

10/10
-HF06
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PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2006 9:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks a lot, man. I appreciate it.

Yes, I've written a few other series, though, unfortunately, so far this is the most popular one to date. Heh.
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PostPosted: Mon May 01, 2006 11:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm gonna read this, man, I liked the look of it alot. And skimming through I found a line that made me go 'Hell Yeah!'
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"You've got to stop saying that, Eyal," she said. "It's Australia. It's beautiful everyday."


Thankyou, we rock *bows*. If the start is anything to go by I'll enjoy the rest of it, hope to read it soon.
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PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2006 7:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, in a good way.

I'm currently reading a book by the name of Footfall, By Larry Niven. It starts out with a bunch of stuff having to do with the President (US) and his advisors and anyway, your descriptions and diologes with your charecters imediatly called to mind Nivens work. Thats a complement.
Keep up the good stuff.

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PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2006 1:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you, Delta. I've never read anything by Larry Niven, though perhaps I should give it a try.

- Arthur
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PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2006 7:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I read it, superbly written and well thought out. I liked the idea of the Council, reminded me of the Galactic Senate from star Wars, hehe. Very nice story you've started here, keep it up.
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PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2006 7:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I'm gonna read this, man, I liked the look of it alot. And skimming through I found a line that made me go 'Hell Yeah!' Quote:
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"You've got to stop saying that, Eyal," she said. "It's Australia. It's beautiful everyday."



Thankyou, we rock *bows*. If the start is anything to go by I'll enjoy the rest of it, hope to read it soon.


Hmmm. James, obviously you've never been to a little place called Melbourne. Great story.
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PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2006 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks to both of you. Hopefully I can avoid any further resemblances to Star Wars Smile

Where do you live in Australia, by the way CDW?
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PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Truely something to come back to after this long period of being away. I am truely impressed. It makes my stories look like junk, to be frank. Well, hope you post more stories!
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PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 5:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wellington wrote:
Thanks to both of you. Hopefully I can avoid any further resemblances to Star Wars Smile

Where do you live in Australia, by the way CDW?


Oh no, I liked the Star Warsesque part, very much so, don't change it too drastically. And I live about two hours out of Sydney (which isn't the capital, but it damn well should be), it's quite nice here Very Happy .

And before I forget, this is my 1000th post, good to break the hundreds finally.
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