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Squad 47: Path to Victory, Part 4
Posted by Spartan 006 (bconthepc@hotmail.com)
27 April 2006, 1:05 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Spartan_0060427060105031.html

Spartan006 · Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 10:15 pm Post subject:

Okay, since it seems like no one else is going to comment on my story, I'll go ahead and say some stuff. This is the final part of the Path to Victory series. To understand some parts of the story you will have to read the last part or the entire series. I wasn't really into this one. I just wanted to get it over with, but I think that I did a pretty good job. Please comment on the story. It's really nice to see people comment the story that you worked on.
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STEEL RAIN · Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 10:31 pm Post subject:

Very good.

You caught my intrest, which is hard to do.

Try to get MCC to come by and nit pick.

Spartan006 · Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 9:08 pm Post subject:

Thanks for the comment, Steel Very Happy

. I'm happy to see that I have picked(I think that's how it's spelled) your interest. About MCC, if I send him a PM is it okay if I use your name (otherwise it just seems like spam-vertising)? The entire series as whole is going to be six parts long, and each submission will be a chapter, and there will, hopefully, be three to four chapters per part. Since you liked this one, I would recommend that you back and read the entire series (the first one is my personal favorite, but it's not coded). I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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STEEL RAIN · Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 9:45 pm Post subject:

Sure, go ahead. My GPS sucks, so I'm useless in evaluating work, and quite frankly I could care less, its the plot that interest's me.

Just ask him to evaluate your work.