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PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:28 pm    Post subject: The Last Halo part 3 Reply with quote

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The Last Halo part 3
Posted by pest/swingamajig (car_radical@yahoo.co.uk)
26 April 2006, 9:02 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=pestswingama0426062102201.html
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 5:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really good again, apart from some GPS errors. Keep it up!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice story, I like the fact that you're not afraid to do drastic stuff to your main characters, it adds to the suspense. If you are going to have someone's thoughts, it would be best to italicize their thoughts, it will help to distinguish thoughts from speaking. 9/10
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay I will is it at the beginning and at the end to do italics?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 9:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh I guess it is! Scrap that...
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PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2006 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

pest/swingamajig wrote:
Okay I will is it at the beginning and at the end to do italics?

Oh, I guess it is! Scrap that.

You knew that all along.
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PostPosted: Tue May 02, 2006 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

the [i] does not show up on the preview so I actually didnt know
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PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you do it correctly it wiil italicatized in the preview.
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