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Halo 2: Beginnings part 2

 
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 4:06 pm    Post subject: Halo 2: Beginnings part 2 Reply with quote

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Halo 2: Beginnings part 2
Posted by Mark Lieberg (Malieberg@msn.com)
8 October 2004, 7:12 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mark_lieberg.1008040712352.html
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 6:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought I already put one comment down...

Oh well, won't hurt for two!

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 1:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey can you give me the full story to that?? What is it anyway, where did you get it from??? srry about all the questions its just that i'm a big fan and i like to read up on things like this!

Thanks
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 2:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, cool it. This is a Fan Fiction site, not an official site.

Apparently, this is another "Earth Under seige" plot - uncreative, boring, typical. It's been overused, and has lost its taste.

Now hear this - come up with an entirely different plot that could easily stand alone. Try it. And once more - remember that a story is something more than just words you slapped together in eight minutes.

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Post Script - Please, take your time. Take a few days off, call in sick, and put some effort behind your work, make the military dialogue realistic (It should be short and professional) and include detail.
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