HBO Fan Fiction

hboff · Site Admin Joined: 25 Jul 2004 Posts: 4351

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Halo 2: Beginnings part 2
Posted by Mark Lieberg (Malieberg@msn.com)
8 October 2004, 7:12 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mark_lieberg.1008040712352.html

SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 6:43 am Post subject:

I thought I already put one comment down...

Oh well, won't hurt for two!

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"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.

Pimp MC · Member Joined: 07 Nov 2004 Posts: 1

Hey can you give me the full story to that?? What is it anyway, where did you get it from??? srry about all the questions its just that i'm a big fan and i like to read up on things like this!

Thanks

SYSTEM · Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 2:47 am Post subject:

Hey, cool it. This is a Fan Fiction site, not an official site.

Apparently, this is another "Earth Under seige" plot - uncreative, boring, typical. It's been overused, and has lost its taste.

Now hear this - come up with an entirely different plot that could easily stand alone. Try it. And once more - remember that a story is something more than just words you slapped together in eight minutes.

- Dave.

Post Script - Please, take your time. Take a few days off, call in sick, and put some effort behind your work, make the military dialogue realistic (It should be short and professional) and include detail.
_________________
"Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks. When she saw what she had done, she gave her father forty-one." - A child's nursery rhyme.

"When in doubt, empty your magazine." - Murphy's first law of combat operations.