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Halo 2: Prolouge: Beginnings....

 
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 4:06 pm    Post subject: Halo 2: Prolouge: Beginnings.... Reply with quote

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Halo 2: Prolouge: Beginnings....
Posted by Mark Lieberg (malieberg@msn.com)
8 October 2004, 7:10 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mark_lieberg.1008040710341.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No use of the Code, poor writing, and it was overall uninteresting.

I wouldn't be so hard on you if you read the guidelines; do so before you post again. Bad grammer, spelling, etc., can happen to new writers, but I'd expect everyone to at least read the guidelines that have been set up for you own good.

-Russ
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2004 6:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Professional soldiers don't swear at oncoming enemies.

Anyhow. Like Russ said. Go take up some English lessons.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 10:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry for this post that has no relevence to the story but I just realised that this thread is 343, im off to find 117, but i won't post on that one, no point. And i agree with russ and Dave.
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