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PostPosted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 12:24 pm    Post subject: Human Takeover Reply with quote

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Human Takeover
Posted by Grantix (eightypercentblinding@yahoo.com)
31 March 2006, 11:39 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Grantix0331061139321.html
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 07, 2006 9:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well there's a lot to say about that poem. Well first of all, I really didn't notice any kind of rhyming scheme(but I may be wrong)and it was kind of confusing. The vocabulary was good but still the poem lacked detail. Also it was pretty short. Not too shabby, but not grade-a either Rolling Eyes. Keep trying...
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 10:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well...that was short. Saw no rhyming scheme either. Take your time next time to lengthen it, and to make it rhyme.
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