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The Words of the Dead A Halo Poem

 
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 2:36 pm    Post subject: The Words of the Dead A Halo Poem Reply with quote

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The Words of the Dead A Halo Poem
Posted by X cal1ber
24 March 2006, 1:11 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=X_cal1ber0324060111381.html
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 3:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great poem. I like how in some parts you used an imperfect rhyme scheme to get the right words in, brilliant. The part with the grunts was hilarious Laughing
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bleh, didn't flow with me.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 4:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, I really liked it. We're so used to killing in Halo and seeing others get killed that we never stop to think about the feelings of the victims. lol, it would have been cool if there was a final stanza for all the xbox live players that die in multiplayer games.

Very good.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 9:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good.

Connecting all the feelings and thoughts of the people who have died throughout Halo was very effective. If I have to critisice it would be about your one mistake. The Chief didn't kill Mercy. When he took the Infection Form away it killed him, he would of died if the Chief didn't take it away anyway.

Oh yes, and you missed someone Foehammer from Halo 1.
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