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STEEL RAIN
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Looking good, Keep it up!
Sorry about not posting sooner life's been hecktic and I forgot.  |
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Spartan006
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Great story  , and I usually don't say that about stories with elites for main characters ( hey, I got nothing against elites, but I just find Humanity more appealing is all ) I give your story a 9/10. Which is the highest score I give to a non-human/Spartan story ( unless it's really, really good  )
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STEEL RAIN
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| You think that this was good, You should read what else he wrote, and I mean all of it, not just the series! |
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Halo Fanatic 2005
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Steel rain is right, His writing is brilliant!
read the rest, you have to.
I don't agree with what you said either, Elite stories or even stories from the perspective of other Covenant species are just as good as human fiction.
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Spartan006
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I'm not trying to say that stories like this with elites are of a lower grade, but I just enjoy stories involving humanity more, from my point of view ( I will make it point to go read the rest of his stories ). Just like some people prefer stories about grunts to other stories, or elites, or Spartans, or marines/ODSTs; it's not the story, just my point of view.
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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This was posted on March 17th! When's the next one out!?
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Azathoth
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Oh yeah. My next chapter was kind of crappy, so I didn't post it immediately. Then, I had to write a term paper for History and I kind of shoved this to the back of my mind. Then I erased the chapter and started over because the angst was utterly unconvincing. With luck, it'll be coming out this next update. Then again, maybe I'll just torture you to insanity by withholding it FOREVER!  Ehhh, never mind. It'll be out by Friday. |
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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| Azathoth wrote: | | Then again, maybe I'll just torture you to insanity by withholding it FOREVER! |
I read that and died... almost.
| Azathoth wrote: | | Ehhh, never mind. It'll be out by Friday. |
That's the bit that saved me. |
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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Wait, I know it, 'Gamsamee is the Arbiter! You said at the beginning you were going to show a resemblence between MC and him. You then said you scrapped it so you used the Arbiter instead! Because if you use him he can actually be the Arbiter becaues they're both Sangheili! It all fits together, that's why he even used those Brute weapons in one of your chapters. He does in the game.
| You, in Commander: Parasite, wrote: | | "I knew 'Vansamee. He was a good friend. A good person. And if he thought you were worth giving his life for, I am going to respect his choice! He was either brilliant or insane. Just like you. |
He was right. 'Vutbrugee and 'Vansamee both saw the potential in him!
I'm a genious.  |
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STEEL RAIN
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| Yep, and his brother is half jaw, it took you that long to figure it out!? |
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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'Fulsamee is Half-jaw? Which one is the Seraphima and what are 'Gamsamee's dreams about then? Azathoth, whats going on, or are you going to torcher us again by making us wait for the next chpater? 
I can't belive people are still posting here. Well, there's only three of us now. |
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Azathoth
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| STEEL RAIN wrote: | | Yep, and his brother is half jaw, it took you that long to figure it out!? |
Well, you have it somewhat mistaken. 'Gamsamee is Half-Jaw, not the Arbiter. Good detective work, but I did say that he tore off his left jaw to prevent infection, which is a bit more obvious than you were looking for.
| Halo Fanatic 2006 wrote: | | Which one is the Seraphima? |
You may give me the Chinese Water Torture, but I will never tell. Well, maybe in a few chapters. The AI Azathoth would tell you to stop looking at things so objectively.
And yes, there was a time when I considered making 'Gamsamee the Arbiter, but I decided not to. I prefer Half-Jaw. I like his voice better, he can't die, he says incredibly funny things with IWHBYD on, and when you have Sputnik on, Flood Infection Forms make him fly. He's awesome.
Next chapter: Shocking revelations! Prophecies that could have been! Betrayal! A bunch of other stuff I probably forgot!
| Halo Fanatic 2006 wrote: | | I'm a genious. |
Yeah well 343GS was wrong about that too. BURN! jk |
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STEEL RAIN
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| If you dont post it, I'll hunt you down and beat you to death with your own spine for your herisy (however you spell it), Your stories are probably the only covie POV that has me truly hooked. |
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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| Azathoth wrote: | | And yes, there was a time when I considered making 'Gamsamee the Arbiter, but I decided not to. I prefer Half-Jaw. I like his voice better, he can't die, he says incredibly funny things with IWHBYD on, and when you have Sputnik on, Flood Infection Forms make him fly. He's awesome. |
True, Half-jaw is pretty good, but I assumed the Arbiter since he was more of a main character in the game.
| Azathoth wrote: | Halo Fanatic 2006 wrote:
Which one is the Seraphima?
You may give me the Chinese Water Torture, but I will never tell. Well, maybe in a few chapters. The AI Azathoth would tell you to stop looking at things so objectively. |
It's 'Gamsamee, too obvious now. He's been the main character all along.
| STEEL RAIN wrote: | | herisy (however you spell it) |
Herecy. 
| Azathoth wrote: | | The AI Azathoth would tell you to stop looking at things so objectively. |
The AI Azathoth doesn't know me and the AI Azathoth wouldn't tell me to stop anything or he'd be in... in... whatever the name is for an AI hospital (if they have them). And did I mention both the Azathoths are getting on my nerves. The AI by being... annoying and the real Azathoth by not revealing his ultimate plot secrets!!!!!!!  Did I overeact or am I now just getting way of subject.
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| Halo Fanatic 2006 wrote: | | I'm a genious. |
Yeah well 343GS was wrong about that too. BURN! |
I'm a genius and you know it. Jealous.  |
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