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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 4:22 pm    Post subject: Commander: Harvest Reply with quote
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Commander: Harvest
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
2 March 2006, 10:40 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1170302062240131.html
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 8:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This has to be one of your best ones yet. In one of the lines you said "spartan and neat" can you explain this. I am looking forward to your next instalment. Keep up the good work. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Spartan is very non-materialistic and bare.

This was a very good update, and I like the way you worked the famous line into the end. Good GPS and code, so overall just very good.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 9:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
damn my vocab skills. Mad
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 7:40 pm    Post subject: Commander series Reply with quote
I love this series and can't wait for the next installment. You have a real gift for storytelling and could be an excellent writer.
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