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Beginning of the Crusade: Chapter 1

 
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:38 pm    Post subject: Beginning of the Crusade: Chapter 1 Reply with quote

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Beginning of the Crusade: Chapter 1
Posted by James (neme188@hanmail.net)
4 October 2004, 9:27 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=james.1004042127201.html
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 5:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

To make things a lot easier to read, try to include the code.

To make something bold, simply put before it and after it. For underline and italics, just change the b to an i or a u.
To indent the beginning of a paragraph simply put [indent].

Overall, it was an alright story. Try to tighten things up for the next part.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 5:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoops. For bold do this : .
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I've really screwed up here. Just forget what I said before and read the bottom of this link to learn of the code.

http://halosn.bungie.org/misc/ffformdirections.html
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 8:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure is a lot dialog, and no Code that is good either. But, I lost interest right in the second sentence.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I meant to say isn't good either.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2004 8:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2004 11:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

97% damage? So the ship was 3% away from exploding? Damage estimates don't quite work like that. Keep trying.
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