Imperorator_Jon Member

Joined: 29 Oct 2005 Posts: 97 Location: Moop?
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 1:13 am Post subject: |
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okay, I am hoping for CONSTRUCTIVE replies. I know I made some rocky spelling mistakes in the begining. Sorry about that. I also realise some grammer issues also. I know it isn't normal for the writer to post first, but I am just plain un-normal. ...... Hope that you give my SECOND story some good pointers.
Signed,
Imperorator Jon, ruler of your local star system.... |
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