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Alien Brethren: Chapter 14: Back to the Bloodshed

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 5:22 pm    Post subject: Alien Brethren: Chapter 14: Back to the Bloodshed Reply with quote

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Alien Brethren: Chapter 14: Back to the Bloodshed
Posted by Alex L (Greek Elite) (yoshi64y@aol.com)
20 January 2006, 6:47 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_L_Greek0120061847421.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:48 pm    Post subject: Story Reply with quote

Yeah! Go Alex!

This chapter was inspiring...that is the only word I can describe this. Though I was confused at some on the parts with the deleted creatures. I don't know what Keelbugs look like, or Blind Wolf's. I think it would be at some, better to go into very descriptive imaging and appearences of these instead of assuming that everyone knows what they are and what they look like.

The other thing was the 'sir' and the 'major' issue that I pointed out earlier that is not how the Caste generizes. But other than that I give this 10/10.
Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2006 9:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've been having trouble, I'll read this when I can.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

allright, to all whom decide to read this comment, I have an announcement.

I'm retiring from Alien Brethren and writing fan fiction on bungie.org. A shocker I know, but don't be alarmed Alien Brethren fans as I have selected another author to continue my story's legacy with my guidelines on how I would have finished this series (though he has the right to extend the series as much as he wants).

Now for all of you who may be complaining or having negative thoughts about my 'retirement' I have many reasons which have allready been explained to my 'understudy author'. It's a long list of reasons that if you should ever be curious to what they may be I suggest you PM me for information.

That's all for now and I hope that ALL of you look forward to the next chapter of Alien Brethren WHICH will has been planned out and frame worked by me yet written by another... Just look for the title "Alien Brethren" in the upcoming weeks.

Later (however I will continue reading my own series which will be continued and other series in which i am interested in).
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