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An Unngoy Life: Chapter 37: Personal Vendettas
Posted by CrazyGrunt (thomas-hoskins@comcast.net)
18 January 2006, 1:07 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=CrazyGrunt0118060107111.html

Halo Fanatic 2005 · Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 8:37 pm Post subject:

Good, but take your time. It seemed to move on to quickly and Unggoy wouldn't even be able to hold Beam Rifles or Carbines. Neither would they be able to hold Energy Swords (you used them earlier on in the series).

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:17 am Post subject:

Hey, the story has been going like that for 36 chapters. Bit late to stop.

Phædrus · Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:29 am Post subject:

This is the first time I've read one of your stories, and I can sum this one up in two words:

Mindless drivel.

Star Wars + Mindless action + Shoota Boyz? + Grunt Flood + No discernible detail whatsoever = I'm not quite sure. Is this even Halo fiction? Or something else? I really can't tell. I'm serious.

I'm sorry, Crazy, but... All I can really say is: "Huh...?"

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:44 am Post subject:

Oh it's Halo fiction, it's just been a while since I've had time to work on the story, so I need to get back in the groove. Also, have you read the entire series?

Phædrus · Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:49 am Post subject:

No. But please explain - shoota boyz?

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 7:28 pm Post subject:

It's form of an Ork infantry squad, which Orks refer to as a Mob. There basically Shoota Boyz carry around big machineguns they call Shootas, which fire rounds the size of an unggoy's arm.

Darkhour · Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:21 am Post subject:

Man for awhile there i thought that you had stopped writing this series Sad

. But im glad that you haven't. Anyways on the shoota boyz like crazy said but there from a kinda of a board game called Warhammer 40k if you didn't know that. It a good game and quite franctly the story might seem a bit wierd but i think Crazy did a good job connecting the three.

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:13 am Post subject:

Thank you darkhour, for the compliment.

Azathoth · Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:14 am Post subject:

Hah! Warhammer?

*goes and reads all 37 chapters*

*eyes fall out on keyboard*

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:26 am Post subject:

It took you that long Question

I didn't spell it like lord of the rings.

Darkhour · Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:27 am Post subject:

good yea man im mean come on since when has lord of the rings ever had shoota boyz?!?!?