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Chapter One: High Charity

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 2:57 pm    Post subject: Chapter One: High Charity Reply with quote

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Chapter One: High Charity
Posted by macskull (mac.skull@gmail.com)
30 December 2005, 11:57 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=macskull1230052357201.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty good BUT sixteen Brutes, twenty Drones and twelve Jackals is a lot of Covies. If the Chief killed them all, that would take much more than 5 minutes, and I think that there's too many off them for him to just run past. Otherwise, quite good.
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