HBO Fan Fiction

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Commander: Drinol
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
26 December 2005, 3:01 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1171226051501281.html

Caleb the Jackal · Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 2:09 pm Post subject:

Holy cow man that was so cool. I can not believe that noone has read this.

I did see a few mistakes but all in all this was really good.

I always love taking a look into the training of the Elites.

Very nice. Don't forget to proofread and get someone else to do it to.

Caleb

Azathoth · Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:35 am Post subject:

I would get someone else to proofread, but 1) my parents don't like that I write here, so I can't ask them (hell, they don't even like my playing Halo)
2) my friends are all worse at GPS than me and 3) the only other game-player who I could ask is my sister, who's away at college. I'd email here the stories, but she always has a shedload of work to do so I don't.

Most people posted their comments about this one in the thread for Commander: Sangheili. Glad you (and everyone else who reviewed it) liked it![/code]