HBO Fan Fiction

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Sentinel Combat Log
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
13 December 2005, 9:37 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1171213052137551.html

ShotgunGoBOOM · Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 5:58 am Post subject:

I actually like this kind of style of writing.

Very nice way of making the view point from the Sentinel, didn't clutter or make it look bad at all. Try to make more logs like this if you can.

8/10, an eight only because the plot was already known, everthing else was great.

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:13 am Post subject:

Yeah agreed, this was an enjoyable read... Keep it up.

Nick Kang · Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:14 am Post subject:

Yeah, pretty good. There were a couple words in there that an advanced computer wouldn't use, like 'huge,' but it was still a pretty enjoyable read.
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GreekElite · Member Joined: 26 Sep 2005 Posts: 64 Location: WIsconsin

even for a fan fiction based on a Sentinel point of view, this was really interesting, creative, and well done.

Hats off, that was definatly something new...nice job