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PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 2:10 pm    Post subject: Sentinel Combat Log Reply with quote

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Sentinel Combat Log
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
13 December 2005, 9:37 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1171213052137551.html
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 5:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I actually like this kind of style of writing.

Very nice way of making the view point from the Sentinel, didn't clutter or make it look bad at all. Try to make more logs like this if you can.

8/10, an eight only because the plot was already known, everthing else was great.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah agreed, this was an enjoyable read... Keep it up.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, pretty good. There were a couple words in there that an advanced computer wouldn't use, like 'huge,' but it was still a pretty enjoyable read.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 9:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

even for a fan fiction based on a Sentinel point of view, this was really interesting, creative, and well done.

Hats off, that was definatly something new...nice job
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