HBO Fan Fiction

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Halo: The Scythe of Death Part Eleven- Finale
Posted by LordofDestruction (sarcasticavenger007@yahoo.com)
10 December 2005, 2:04 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=LordofDestru1210050204161.html

LordofDestruction

Seriously, though, could i get some feedback? I need to know what i'm doing right and what i'm doing wrong

russ687 · Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 5:02 am Post subject:

Well, this isn't technically incorrect, but die-hards like me insist that it is. Author Notes really should be posted here on the story, unless you are referencing some information (like someone else's idea or details).

Nice job formatting this thing, and everything was easy to read. I'd give you a medal or something, but I think compliance with HBO's rules should be normal, not extradordinary. In any case, good attention to detail.

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 6:27 am Post subject:

Holy Shit! I remember way before I started writing, I can remember reading this fiction. This is what got me into writing in the first place! For some reason I only read four or so chapters so you can expect me to read all of this very soon. I will put up a review up when I'm done.

And if I haven't said it before, thanks so much for writing this; I loved it.

LordofDestruction · Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 7:06 pm Post subject:

Thanks for reviewing. Very Happy

I had the tank stop in the story before firing because i figured, if you have the chance, you might as well make your shot as accurate as possible. Its better to spend 2 seconds stopping to hit the enemy then 5 seconds reloading to try again.

As for universal time, i thought it made sense, keeping everyone in the military on the same time, rather than a thousand different local times.