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Wanna Be a Spartan (A parody)
Posted by A Halo Fan...natic (mikeandrewp@gmail.com)
5 December 2005, 2:02 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=A_Halo_Fan..1205050202261.html

Caleb the Jackal · Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 9:15 pm Post subject:

Ha ha nice one AHFN.

Good song. I love parodies.

Caleb

Phædrus · Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 10:00 pm Post subject:

Thankyou.

I think I could have spent a bit more time on this, and I think I lost a tad bit of the rythm, but I think it turned out ok. Not as good as the original song, but pretty good.

But how about you guys?

Pooman · Member Joined: 18 Aug 2005 Posts: 86 Location: Kentucky

Hehe, nice one dude. I was singing this song when reading it. It worked! (for the most part.) Good job, it kept me entertained. 8.8/10

Spartan058-HaloGeeky · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 3:32 am Post subject:

mothers...they don't seem to understand... Rolling Eyes

TK262 · Member Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 39

hmmm......That was a nice remake of the song. Nice job.. It sort of sounded like a rap to me for some reason... Smile

Phædrus · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:27 pm Post subject:

Surprisingly, this has been passed over by almost all of the older members. Where are you, Main? Dave? Jilly? C'mon! I want to hear your opinions on this.

CoLd BlooDed · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:37 pm Post subject:

Pretty good, AHFN - first thing I've seen from you... ever.

I've never actually heard the song, but from the looks of it, you've done a pretty good job creating a parody of it.

Sorry for the short comment, but I'm sick.

Phædrus · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:44 pm Post subject:

I have a few old things. A couple of sucky series, two or three poems (one of 'em pretty good - War of Attrition), a Halo parody of some Christmas songs (It actually didn't get posted until a week after Christmas, though).

I don't mind short comments, though.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Looks like I'm not the only slacker of the bunch. Oh well. At least I'm here.

Interesting. But pretty good. I saw the rhyming issues you were talking about, but it was still decent. As a poem, it would not have worked. But, parodies worok a little differently.

Now, get out some more fiction. These paradies and poems don't take up enough of my time. Where's the real stuff? Very Happy

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Phædrus · Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:10 am Post subject:

Locked up in my head, and I forget where the keyhole is. I think it's my right ear, but whenever I put in my parents car keys, I hear this strange buzzing sound... Confused

But yeah, I told Dave my woes and he said "no-protagonist syndrome". I think it's related to AIDs. Smile