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Warning-Hitch Hikers May Be Escaping Convicts: Chapter Five
Posted by Spartan 034 (zack_034@hotmail.net)
4 December 2005, 1:46 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Spartan_0341204050146321.html

Pooman · Member Joined: 18 Aug 2005 Posts: 86 Location: Kentucky

Wowie, great chapter. Which Elite was the one that died? Was he the slave master? Nice action scenes. That Special Operations Elite is hardcore. Kepp writing and I'll keep reading. 9.6/10

thedarkfire · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:39 pm Post subject:

Very good. I'll look for part 6

Syotica · Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 10:59 pm Post subject:

Not too shabby.
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TK262 · Member Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 39

I read chapter 1-2. they were very good. I have one question for you though. You staited that the slaves could revolt against them very easily. And could overwhelm them since there were much more slaves then guards. So why were they givin only minimal weapons and armour? And why not soem more guards or possibly have different sections of the underground area to store slaves so that all of them arnt in one place. Therefor they can't turn as easily?

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