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The Battle for Sunjahil: Walrus Attack
Posted by Mainevent (mainevent117@gmail.com)
30 November 2005, 2:53 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent1130050253541.html

Pooman · Member Joined: 18 Aug 2005 Posts: 86 Location: Kentucky

Really good opening paragraph. I though this was a comedy at first beacuse of the title... Thank the stars it's not, beacuse it is really good. This story actually got me excited. I'm excited for the next chapters. 10/10

sdn · Member Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Posts: 121 Location: afk

CrazyGrunt · Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:31 am Post subject:

quick question. are you basing this story before Halo one? because the Sangheili were betrayed in Halo 2.

Mainevent · Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:37 am Post subject:

This one doesn't take place in the regular Halo timeline per say.

If you had to liken it to a period you could say beginning of Halo 2 and then off track. (IE the setting of the beginning of Halo 2, none of the story).

HELSING · Member Joined: 21 Jan 2005 Posts: 151

Great story. It's good to see that some of the old crowd are still around.

Caleb the Jackal · Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:43 pm Post subject:

Very nice. I am at school so I can't comment right now but I promise I will tonight.

Caleb

Nick Kang · Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:32 pm Post subject:

Friggin' kickass! Awesome story, Main.

I also like the alternate-reality of fighting a war against all the Covies better than the real version. In my stories, that's how it is all set up.
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Guardian · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 12:26 am Post subject:

meh, you've done better. Your foreshadow fictions that you've written were better than this.

And i'm definately sticking to my opinion about this story. It was ok.

Mainevent · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:20 am Post subject:

Which foreshadow fics?

Guardian · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:41 am Post subject:

De Ja Vu.

Mainevent · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:50 am Post subject:

Oh yea...heh.

Sterfrye36 · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:15 am Post subject:

Well, it was by no means bad, but I think you've written better. Hey, don't get me wrong, I loved the well-thought out Elite homeworld and tactics that make this fic believeable. It just seemed that things kind of, well, slipped by withoutme fully comprehending what had happened.

Oh, and I agree with Pooman. The title looked like a comedy. Laughing

Please, by all means, continue "Terminals". That stuff was sweet. Razz

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Mainevent · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:18 am Post subject:

Fine fine, I'll finish terminals. *Puts head to forehead while looking away*

If my fans do so want me to, I am but their humble servant.

Sterfrye36 · Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:20 am Post subject: