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The Battle for Sunjahil: Walrus Attack
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 7:11 pm    Post subject: The Battle for Sunjahil: Walrus Attack Reply with quote

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The Battle for Sunjahil: Walrus Attack
Posted by Mainevent (mainevent117@gmail.com)
30 November 2005, 2:53 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mainevent1130050253541.html
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 10:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really good opening paragraph. I though this was a comedy at first beacuse of the title... Thank the stars it's not, beacuse it is really good. This story actually got me excited. I'm excited for the next chapters. 10/10
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:

the President of the U.N. had made it abundantly clear, there would be no treaties. The time for treaties died with Reach, and fittingly, a ship named in her honor was at the battle.

Hell yeah! Pwned.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

quick question. are you basing this story before Halo one? because the Sangheili were betrayed in Halo 2.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 12:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This one doesn't take place in the regular Halo timeline per say.

If you had to liken it to a period you could say beginning of Halo 2 and then off track. (IE the setting of the beginning of Halo 2, none of the story).
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great story. It's good to see that some of the old crowd are still around.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice. I am at school so I can't comment right now but I promise I will tonight.

Caleb
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Friggin' kickass! Awesome story, Main.

I also like the alternate-reality of fighting a war against all the Covies better than the real version. In my stories, that's how it is all set up.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

meh, you've done better. Your foreshadow fictions that you've written were better than this.

And i'm definately sticking to my opinion about this story. It was ok.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Which foreshadow fics?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

De Ja Vu.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh yea...heh.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, it was by no means bad, but I think you've written better. Hey, don't get me wrong, I loved the well-thought out Elite homeworld and tactics that make this fic believeable. It just seemed that things kind of, well, slipped by withoutme fully comprehending what had happened.

Oh, and I agree with Pooman. The title looked like a comedy.Laughing

Please, by all means, continue "Terminals". That stuff was sweet. Razz Cool
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fine fine, I'll finish terminals. *Puts head to forehead while looking away*

If my fans do so want me to, I am but their humble servant.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mainevent wrote:
Fine fine, I'll finish terminals. *Puts head to forehead while looking away*

If my fans do so want me to, I am but their humble servant.


You have no choice!

*kick*

Hey, thedarkfire makes it work on me. Why should you be any different? Wink Laughing
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