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Short Tales of Terror (2): Granny Mat Station
Posted by Chuckles
21 November 2005, 8:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Chuckles1121050829341.html

SeverianofUrth · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:52 pm Post subject:

Peanut butter as a horror device has been greatly under appreciated. What'll you use next, though? I'm thinking tofu, but maybe milk will work just as well... 'Well, my friend's wheelchair-ridden sister is a total bitch, but she's lactose intolerant so when she came over to mock me..."

Or maybe not.

This was great. Just creepy. And the scene with the sparkling mints... I really thought that something had happened, that it was the girl coming to get them. Really got me.

I don't have much else to say. Just that this was excellent, but then, when has that not been the case? I'm looking forward to the next part, or perhaps another chapter of Waking the Dead.

ShotgunGoBOOM · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:22 pm Post subject:

This story is EXACTLY why I love to read your stuff, Chuck. Can I call you Chuck?

Once again, though, you wrote an awsome story. Where the hell did you get that imagination? I could use one like yours. Peanut butter as a deadly weapon made me laugh. What's next, jelly? All in all, you freaked me out though. I'm doing the game next time I go over to someone's house at night.

10/10

Caleb the Jackal · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:10 pm Post subject:

Simpy stunning.

I don't think I have seen anyone write anything as randomly as you do.

Very nice.

10/10

Caleb

(Na)Marl · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:25 pm Post subject:

--Hehe, nice. I don't get how it goes with the other story though.

Tin Can Man · Member Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Posts: 170

Damn you C.T, I won't get to sleep tonight! Mad

Still, fantastically creepy story. Shivers up the spine.

Especially as my light began to flicker as I read the story.

Eep.

SYSTEM · Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:14 am Post subject:

- Man, I feel...

A very strange sense of catharsis.

But with the most terrible, ravaging, awful sense of dread.

Wording, in the story, was harsh, short, and brutal at the scene of the impact, and listening to the beginning of the call of Kthulu was probably the scariest experience I've ever had in a novel.

Ugh, I'm still shaken... A Hell Yeah, right off the bat, but geez... I'm traumatized.

- Dave.
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Imperorator_Jon · Member Joined: 29 Oct 2005 Posts: 97 Location: Moop?

*rocks back and forth while reading Chuckle's story* I smell clown de-oderant do you? Well all in all you made me sh*t myself when you used the spark thing. don't get it but was hillarious and scarry at the same time. Also I loved that little cliffhanger thing with him hanged by himself but the cripples smell was in the room. On another note are you going to finish these stories? I read the last one and I was wondering if that marine dude was going to keep on winning and dying? all in all

# 10/10 Make more scary stuff, great ideas for payback! NRS score: Shocked

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 6:35 am Post subject:

Hmm, well... This was awesome! Twisted and completly Chuckles-esque, good work man.

Mark Lieberg · Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:41 pm Post subject:

that was...scary/awesome/mysterious.
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Mister Gray · Member Joined: 23 Nov 2005 Posts: 24 Location: U.S.A.

Holy sh*t! Well, that effectively scared the bejesus out of me. Apparently this is a part 2. Think you could send part 1 to czcats@hotmail.com? Thanks, Chuckles.

-Gray

P.S. I know it was a "question better left un-asked" but what was the thing about the cripple's smell? Wierd... brilliant, but wierd...

Commander Demitri Wolf · Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:06 am Post subject:

Just go to halo.bungie.org/fanfic and search for Chuckles' stuff, and its not part two really, its the second unrelated story in a series of them.

Mister Gray · Member Joined: 23 Nov 2005 Posts: 24 Location: U.S.A.

ah, yeah, i found that out. thanks anyway though.

I'm working on a story to submit to the fanfic site, any pointers? i'm a little new to this... obviously...

man, i was "smart" enough to read both the "Short Tales of Terror" stories right before going to bed Shocked

kept me up half the night tucking in the covers, lest a bony hand find an entrance and ecact revenge..... heh. *shivers*

anyway, i've got AIM, MSN, and YIM so IM me with any hints about the story.

with much appretiation for ANY help,
Gray

Wellington · Member Joined: 30 Sep 2005 Posts: 110 Location: Canada

Wow. A genuinely freaky fanfic. Nicely done.

I thought it was excellent right from the confession to the denouement. I felt for Scott during his confession. One of those really crappy things that you can't believe really happened... nicely described here.