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Short Tales of Terror (2): Granny Mat Station
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:21 pm    Post subject: Short Tales of Terror (2): Granny Mat Station Reply with quote

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Short Tales of Terror (2): Granny Mat Station
Posted by Chuckles
21 November 2005, 8:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Chuckles1121050829341.html
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Peanut butter as a horror device has been greatly under appreciated. What'll you use next, though? I'm thinking tofu, but maybe milk will work just as well... 'Well, my friend's wheelchair-ridden sister is a total bitch, but she's lactose intolerant so when she came over to mock me..."

Or maybe not.

This was great. Just creepy. And the scene with the sparkling mints... I really thought that something had happened, that it was the girl coming to get them. Really got me.

I don't have much else to say. Just that this was excellent, but then, when has that not been the case? I'm looking forward to the next part, or perhaps another chapter of Waking the Dead.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This story is EXACTLY why I love to read your stuff, Chuck. Can I call you Chuck?

Once again, though, you wrote an awsome story. Where the hell did you get that imagination? I could use one like yours. Peanut butter as a deadly weapon made me laugh. What's next, jelly? All in all, you freaked me out though. I'm doing the game next time I go over to someone's house at night.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised Simpy stunning.

I don't think I have seen anyone write anything as randomly as you do.

Very nice.

10/10

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

--Hehe, nice. I don't get how it goes with the other story though.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn you C.T, I won't get to sleep tonight! Mad

Still, fantastically creepy story. Shivers up the spine.

Especially as my light began to flicker as I read the story.

Eep.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

- Man, I feel...

A very strange sense of catharsis.

But with the most terrible, ravaging, awful sense of dread.

Wording, in the story, was harsh, short, and brutal at the scene of the impact, and listening to the beginning of the call of Kthulu was probably the scariest experience I've ever had in a novel.

Ugh, I'm still shaken... A Hell Yeah, right off the bat, but geez... I'm traumatized.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*rocks back and forth while reading Chuckle's story* I smell clown de-oderant do you? Well all in all you made me sh*t myself when you used the spark thing. don't get it but was hillarious and scarry at the same time. Also I loved that little cliffhanger thing with him hanged by himself but the cripples smell was in the room. On another note are you going to finish these stories? I read the last one and I was wondering if that marine dude was going to keep on winning and dying? all in all

# 10/10 Make more scary stuff, great ideas for payback! NRS score: Shocked Cool
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 6:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm, well... This was awesome! Twisted and completly Chuckles-esque, good work man.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Shocked
that was...scary/awesome/mysterious.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
He we nine years old again...


Oops.


Yeah. That was such a huge mistake, I just had to point that one out for you.


Otherwise, it was pretty cool, the story. A good plot; progressed well. Started out pretty innocently, too. A nice little story you created, there. Deep space... I suppose the seclusion would mess with your mind a bit.

Overall, this was a good read. When do you come to the stage next?
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 4:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holy sh*t! Well, that effectively scared the bejesus out of me. Apparently this is a part 2. Think you could send part 1 to czcats@hotmail.com? Thanks, Chuckles.

-Gray

P.S. I know it was a "question better left un-asked" but what was the thing about the cripple's smell? Wierd... brilliant, but wierd...
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just go to halo.bungie.org/fanfic and search for Chuckles' stuff, and its not part two really, its the second unrelated story in a series of them.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ah, yeah, i found that out. thanks anyway though.

I'm working on a story to submit to the fanfic site, any pointers? i'm a little new to this... obviously...

man, i was "smart" enough to read both the "Short Tales of Terror" stories right before going to bed Shocked kept me up half the night tucking in the covers, lest a bony hand find an entrance and ecact revenge..... heh. *shivers*

anyway, i've got AIM, MSN, and YIM so IM me with any hints about the story.

with much appretiation for ANY help,
Gray
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. A genuinely freaky fanfic. Nicely done.

I thought it was excellent right from the confession to the denouement. I felt for Scott during his confession. One of those really crappy things that you can't believe really happened... nicely described here.

Quote:
He we nine years old again...

Yeah. That was such a huge mistake, I just had to point that one out for you.


I don't get the huge error. It was a flashback, afterall.

This had all the elements of a really good scary story. Great job, Chuckles, I really enjoyed the read.

- Arthur


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