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The Mind and the Master Part 5-The Firing of the Rings
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
21 November 2005, 1:15 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1171121050115541.html

Azathoth · Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 5:20 pm Post subject:

Nobody said anything yet? Yeesh, I know it's worse than the others, but I didn't know it was that bad.

Dagorath · Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 8:56 am Post subject:

Hi, Azathoth. I've been watching your series. This was a really good ending, as you tied in how GS asks the Chief if it had been his choice etc, and how all the races survived and all. Though it seemed a little complicated in the end and perhaps a little rushed. You seemed to alternate a little between a crazed GS and a (very) obedient GS. However, the relationship between the Master and the Chief was quite good: neither had known that the Halos destroyed the Flood's food, not the Flood itself.

Started on another series yet? I'm watching you....

Azathoth · Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 3:14 pm Post subject:

Yeah, the ending was a little bit dumb. I mentioned earlier in the series that 343 GS had two personalities though. I might do another series as soon as I get a good idea. This series isn't quite over yet, though- we've focused on the Master, now how about the Mind? Chapter 7-coming soon to a fanfic page near you.

Dagorath · Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 7:56 am Post subject:

Try something about the Elites before their Covenant and their "alliance" with the Prophets. That was what I was going to do, but never got round to it.

It'll be cool. Prehensile Elites. Elites with assault rifles.

STEEL RAIN · Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 12:19 am Post subject:

Shit dont sell yourself short. But you did just disproved the theory of evelution in a sense. Its funny that we spend so much time hunting for aliens during the 20th century when acording to you we are aliens ourselfs to earth