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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:25 pm    Post subject: Menace Reply with quote

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Menace
Posted by Cottrelli (cottrelli@gmail.com)
16 November 2005, 9:36 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cottrelli1116052136241.html
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Winds of time, eh? I guess one could say that; just like they say 'gone with the wind.'

I've gotta read that book sometime.

Nice poem. I don't usually have much to say on poetry, but I liked it. I take it punctuation was omitted for a reason?

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i almost never punctuate in my poems. stylistic flair, i suppose. and in any case, the way i write, punctuation just breaks up the flow. if i do decide to punctaute, it's usually for meaning.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice job. Not much to it, but it wasn't shallow or corny, and for a video game poem, that is saying a lot. I have no problem with your lack of punctuation, especially since your lines were so short.

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