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Posted by Cottrelli (cottrelli@gmail.com)
16 November 2005, 9:36 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cottrelli1116052136241.html

SYSTEM · Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:59 pm Post subject:

The Winds of time, eh? I guess one could say that; just like they say 'gone with the wind.'

I've gotta read that book sometime.

Nice poem. I don't usually have much to say on poetry, but I liked it. I take it punctuation was omitted for a reason?

- Dave.
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Cottrelli · Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:48 pm Post subject:

i almost never punctuate in my poems. stylistic flair, i suppose. and in any case, the way i write, punctuation just breaks up the flow. if i do decide to punctaute, it's usually for meaning.

Chuckles · Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:43 am Post subject:

Nice job. Not much to it, but it wasn't shallow or corny, and for a video game poem, that is saying a lot. I have no problem with your lack of punctuation, especially since your lines were so short.

C.T. Clown