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Revival of the Covenant Chapter 5: Delta Relay

 
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 3:58 pm    Post subject: Revival of the Covenant Chapter 5: Delta Relay Reply with quote
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Revival of the Covenant Chapter 5: Delta Relay
Posted by Mizbehavin (mizbehavincy@gmail.com)
15 November 2005, 11:55 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Mizbehavin1115052355421.html
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
someone new who knows the ways of the code.

Good job with the coding, i'll leave the tearing apart your story for your betterment for the veterans.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I didn't really understand the story since I have not read the other parts.

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The relay station was also used as a arena for one of the Forerunner's favorite sports, Oddball


I liked that. That was funny. I always thought that oddball was a Spartan sport.

WARNING MAJOR NITPICK

I saw a couple of places where you forgot to add a period and I also saw a place where you forgot to add quotation marks.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2005 12:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I just noticed the punctuation errors as I read over it again, I also noticed this is Chapter 5 I meant to release Chapter 4, so the next chapter that comes up will be before this chapter. I took a break from typing up my stories to actually play some more xbox live for once but I'm back and ready to finish this up. Thanks for the comments guys. Wink
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