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hboff
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Tin Can Man
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Sorry I took so long to actually getting round to reading this.
Anyway, I liked it. I thought it didn't seem as action packed as previously, but still liked it. No noticeable errors that I can see at least.
Book 1, eh? |
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Imperorator_Jon
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| its a great story but there is one problem I can see. It is great how you added the new multi-dimesion thing but I will be the first to say enough is enough. It is great you beat battle for Noah but still It is going into poetry small. but still good. just wrap it up. |
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Darkhour
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| I'd have to say that book 1 was great. I read the entire thing and i think that the tie between three different things is awsome. So i just hope you keep writing them. Heck if you published I'd be the first to buy the book. |
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Sebasman
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I like that you use incredible grammar and spelling, but my point is:  WHY THE F*CK ARE YOU MIXING STAR F*CKING WARS AND WARHAMMER 40K WITH HALO!! IT'S NAUSEATING, THE WAY YOU MIX THIS "HALO FAN FICTION" COCKTAIL!! Mmmm.... beer...  Well, you shouldn't've mixed this cocktail consisting of the following: Halo 2, Star Wars, and Warhammer 40k! Halo 2 tastes fine on its own, well, the multiplayer tastes fine, but the campaign is a little bitter... 
P.S: Darkhour, you could just ctrl C+ ctrl V it onto Word, format it to ur liking, and print it, FOR FREE! |
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Darkhour
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| Go figure huh i could do that but that was just a point i made. |
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Halo Fanatic 2006
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| Sebasman wrote: | I like that you use incredible grammar and spelling, but my point is: WHY THE F*CK ARE YOU MIXING STAR F*CKING WARS AND WARHAMMER 40K WITH HALO!! IT'S NAUSEATING, THE WAY YOU MIX THIS "HALO FAN FICTION" COCKTAIL!! Mmmm.... beer... Well, you shouldn't've mixed this cocktail consisting of the following: Halo 2, Star Wars, and Warhammer 40k! Halo 2 tastes fine on its own, well, the multiplayer tastes fine, but the campaign is a little bitter...
P.S: Darkhour, you could just ctrl C+ ctrl V it onto Word, format it to ur liking, and print it, FOR FREE! |
You are mad. THE CAMPAIGN IS THE BEST PART OF THE WHOLE GAME. WHY DO YOU THINK PEOPLE WRITE STORIES ABOUT THE GAME IF PEOPLE ONLY PLAY THE MULTIPLAYER!!!!!!! 
Sorry about that Crazy. I liked the series which I've only just read, phew. |
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