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Part V: A Drastic Step

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 3:51 pm    Post subject: Part V: A Drastic Step Reply with quote

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Part V: A Drastic Step
Posted by DarkZipper (crayolaj@comcast.net)
9 November 2005, 2:27 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=DarkZipper1109050227181.html
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 5:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Anybody?
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 7:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Geez, you're just not getting the recognition you deserve. As an enthusiastic new author more people should be commenting, especially since your story is really very good.

Don't get discouraged, though. With so many entries and so few commentors, new author's stories frequently get lost in the mix regardless of quality. Keep on writing, make it good, and you'll make a name for yourself.

To this particular installment, it was quite good. Again I see you're breaking the mold and stepping outside the box with your ideas. The conversion of the Covenant and the description of Gnarlg's inner struggle is compelling and is the stuff good stories are made of. Kudos for it.

I have only to say, as I said before, it needs to be longer. Things are just happening too fast. I enjoy reading it but it is over before I can even get settled. You have some great ideas here. Explore them more and with better detail and you'll have a great series.

Just my two cents anyway Smile

Again, don't get discouraged. Keep on writing.

- Arthur
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