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A Corrupted Spartans Tale

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 3:51 pm    Post subject: A Corrupted Spartans Tale Reply with quote

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A Corrupted Spartans Tale
Posted by spartan001 (medaman162006@yahoo.com)
8 November 2005, 11:35 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=spartan0011108052335421.html
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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hey guys im new so dont be mad if its not any good


- It's not wether you're good, its whether you' absolutely give it your best.

The first thing is the code. You can find it here. http://hboff.bungie.org/viewtopic.php?t=2785.

- The next thing is the deal with action.
All-action stories have lots of fury, but no real taste at all. And, besides, until you've covered the prerequisites, especially around the areas of dealing with sentence structure and run-ons, then action isn't going to work.

Storyline and such is the most important thing to a story, action isn't. Even in a shooting, violent video game, action in a story isn't important. Sure, it can be used as a tool, but it can't be depended upon.

Well, you'll need the prerequisites, such as proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation; they have to be top-notch. But, if you're willing to stick around and improve, hey...
- You'll find a great community, and a great place to show off your stuff.

- Dave.
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