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 Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | hey guys im new so dont be mad if its not any good |
 - It's not wether you're good, its whether you' absolutely give it your best.
The first thing is the code. You can find it here. http://hboff.bungie.org/viewtopic.php?t=2785.
 - The next thing is the deal with action.
All-action stories have lots of fury, but no real taste at all. And, besides, until you've covered the prerequisites, especially around the areas of dealing with sentence structure and run-ons, then action isn't going to work.
Storyline and such is the most important thing to a story, action isn't. Even in a shooting, violent video game, action in a story isn't important. Sure, it can be used as a tool, but it can't be depended upon.
Well, you'll need the prerequisites, such as proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation; they have to be top-notch. But, if you're willing to stick around and improve, hey...
 - You'll find a great community, and a great place to show off your stuff.
- Dave.
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