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Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 3

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 3:51 pm    Post subject: Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 3 Reply with quote

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Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 3
Posted by Alex L (Greek Elite) (yoshi64y@aol.com)
8 November 2005, 12:37 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_L_Greek1108050037421.html
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 3:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
The betrayal impaled Alei's heart like a pristine Energy Sword.
Excellent line. I could feel the emotion, you are a talented writer. Well this story was excellent. Great job! I knew that Lib and the brute would be bad news. 9.7/10
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks pooman. i was wondering if anyone would comment on my story or not. thanks for the input and give me more feedback please
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im confused, was Betronus beign freed from the prison a flashback? I dont see Baxter in this little thing.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 5:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dojorkan wrote:
Im confused, was Betronus beign freed from the prison a flashback? I dont see Baxter in this little thing.


yes, when Betronus was in the prison it was a Flashback from a past mission.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:04 am    Post subject: Dude your story is the greatest i've ever read Reply with quote

I think that your story has got it all.
I mean every single detail that there is.
And it goes with the story of halo + halo 2 so well.
You are my god and I worship you.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 6:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not too shabby....I woldn't suspect the Covenant calling themselves human names either. Nice stuff. Highly reminds me of my early writing.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 9:58 pm    Post subject: Re: Dude your story is the greatest i've ever read Reply with quote

SpecOpsGt wrote:
I think that your story has got it all.
I mean every single detail that there is.
And it goes with the story of halo + halo 2 so well.
You are my god and I worship you.


if you meant that last line literally then i'm appauled. If you truely respect me as a writer you wouldn't worship me, you'd worship the backbone of my life, God. Thanks for your support and all but calling me your god and worshiping me just doesn't feel too right.

In any case i'm glad you're all enjoying Alien Brethren
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:55 am    Post subject: Sorry Reply with quote

I did not mean that line literally. I read like 15 pages of stories in one night and once i started on yours I couldn't stop reading it. I got a little "overzealous" i think is the word. Anyways sorry. But you are by far one of the most talented writers that I have had the honor of reading.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 8:52 pm    Post subject: Re: Sorry Reply with quote

SpecOpsGt wrote:
I did not mean that line literally. I read like 15 pages of stories in one night and once i started on yours I couldn't stop reading it. I got a little "overzealous" i think is the word. Anyways sorry. But you are by far one of the most talented writers that I have had the honor of reading.


ok *whew*. well it's good to know i've got another fan...however, Fan fiction is going slow and nobody is reading as often as I thought they'd be. I think we're hitting a fan fiction drought...
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 12:45 am    Post subject: You said that you were running into a drought Reply with quote

I think that you should keep it goin with going along with Halo 2's story line first off. That's f-ing brilliant how well it's been going along. And I have another suggestion for you which I'll send you through the mail. (aol)
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