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hboff Site Admin
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Spartan058-HaloGeeky Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2005 Posts: 79 Location: the small backwater planet called Earth...
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 10:53 pm Post subject: wo |
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| i must say, it was highly highly creative. it was interesting and kept me reading from the first sentence...awesome...keep it up! |
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grantix Member
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Thanks a lot. I was thinking about a school project I did once. I had to write a paper about Charles I using only first hand sources, such as documents and paintings. So I had the idea to make my halo story using only first hand sources. Well, I submitted the next part.
Records of a Spartan (Part II)-- Records of a Sangheili
It's all about... well a Sangheili. Not just any Sangheili though, a special one.
So you can chek it out when it comes up. |
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Spartan058-HaloGeeky Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2005 Posts: 79 Location: the small backwater planet called Earth...
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 10:00 pm Post subject: wo |
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| well it works, and you should definetly keep it up! i like the diolouge the best...the "clear, clear,clear" thing was very realistic... |
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grantix Member
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 11:07 pm Post subject: |
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| My dad's in the Army, so I know how it works |
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