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The Arbiter Perspective: Chapter 2

 
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:13 pm    Post subject: The Arbiter Perspective: Chapter 2 Reply with quote

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The Arbiter Perspective: Chapter 2
Posted by Dagorath (hoyinshan@gmail.com)
5 November 2005, 3:08 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Dagorath1105050308211.html
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 1:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now, I know what they mean by,

"Whaddaya mean I can't get to work on time?!"

Always late, in typical me-fashion.

Anyhow, I liked it: I thought it was pretty good; because I only have seen the video once, I had to say it was a pretty nice transcription of the events that took place. Still, I didn't know they tortured him until it burned his armour black; I was always under the impression that they ripped off his golden armour and threw it away and then gave him that big brand.

Aw well, never mind.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No, it was all black when they ripped it off in the video.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why has no one commented for my Halo 2: Defense and Offense Chapter 6 yet?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 7:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
headless of their wounds


I think you meant 'heedless'. Otherwise, that is a creepy image.
Aside from that, excellent story.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 2:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Doh. Though, actually, I don't really think that Marines would run up at people "heedless of their wounds". We're just not that gung-ho.
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