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Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 1

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 5:36 pm    Post subject: Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 1 Reply with quote

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Alien Brethren: Chapter 9: Split Ends: Part 1
Posted by Alex L (Greek Elite) (yoshi64y@aol.com)
3 November 2005, 3:53 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_L_Greek1103050353161.html
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, that last paragraph was just funny. Nice job, great series. 9.3/10
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was pretty funny. Uncomfortable silences.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:54 pm    Post subject: story Reply with quote

That AN? Oh my gosh. Too many. If you're going to include an AN, don't make it stupid and for pete's sake, use the line rules.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 4:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

9 chapters and no code?

shiza, hbo ff is going downhill.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 1:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im kind of mad it was so short.


But I liked the last paragraph alot too.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 8:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dojorkan wrote:
Im kind of mad it was so short.


But I liked the last paragraph alot too.


Well imagine it be a LOT longer with all 3-4 parts...Besides, Part 2 is out so read it and your reading appatite SHOULD be satisfied

And yes, many people do seem to like the last paragraph Very Happy
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