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hboff
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Wellington
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| You've been told to use code and you did not listen. If you want people to read your stories, use code. |
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Michael Archer
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| Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 1:50 am Post subject: story |
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Tsk tsk.
Some stories don't need the indent tag, but this one defently does.
You didn't put capital letters whe you needed to. This is first grade stuff. Wellington is right. Code makes a story MUCH more appealing. And ohmygosh! The title isn't even capitlized? This is not good.
| Quote: | | "Oh no! There going to break in!!!" Rays screeches in fear |
An error in past tense? Please this can not be true.
| Quote: | | Half a meter tall with a bulbous head, and tentacles for legs, the only survivor, a flood. Oh noes! |
Only one word to describe this sentence. WTF
I remember my first story. I used proper grammar so I didn't get bad reviews. Use the PROOFREAD button. |
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OrdinaryKronos
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Of course; not even using this fic anymore; and I have picked up the code years ago.
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Skul
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Why the hell are you replying to two year old posts? 
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Spartan006
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Seriously, if it were a couple months ago then you might reply, but come on, two years later! That's just insane.
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Azathoth
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| He wrote the story, so I guess he's technically allowed to resurrect the thread. But not a good plan, anyway. |
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Sterfrye36
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Eh, don't sweat it. It's happened before. I mean, it's not really advisable, but you're a relative newbie when it comes to this forum, so we can let it slide. But, generally speaking, it's just not a good idea to drag up old threads. 
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